–LORING’S CORNER–
It’s Fantastic
By Loring Emery
Fantasy is the
most truly creative of the fiction genres. In science fiction,
there are physical rules, either based upon what is possible
with advanced science or is possible with “created” science.
This, common in series like “Star Trek,” is that which was
created when folks were more naive scientifically and has now
trapped the science-fiction community into continuing to accept
it or risk breaking the bubble entirely.
Similarly, horror uses features and plots that are
traditionally accepted. Certain levels of violence produce
certain wounds, certain threats produce an established level of
fear, certain things are not, ever, going to be sources of
horror, no matter the plot. If a puppy is to be the antagonist
in a horror tale, he must either produce harm to someone who is
rendered helpless by some other plot-piece, or he is easily
repelled. Daphne du Maurier’s “The Birds” was scary in her day,
now even the Hitchcock film version seems silly.
Fantasy, in contrast with these and other genres, need
not be constrained by rules. If one wants to use existing
fantasy venues and characters, of course the new story must not
alter these change in any major way. The Black Tower must not
have fluorescent lights and rocket launchers. Oberon must not
become a Stallone. Morgan le Fay must not set up a little dress
shop in Camelot.
Better for the writer and the reader is fantasy that
sidesteps the rules of existing fantasies and plows smooth
water. Here the cut must be surgical, any suggestion, any
suspicion that the classic characters or venues have been
“borrowed” means the entire story must conform. The writer must
make it all if he chooses to make a part.
New venues can be generic, such as castles, lakes,
mountains, caves, etc. which exist in the classic fantasy world
but the writer must guard vigilantly against adopting a phrase,
even unintentionally, that transports the reader to a familiar
spot. A plain-vanilla tunnel is safe but a tunnel with a
skeleton lying by a locked door instantly yanks some readers
into the Paths of the Dead of Tolkien.
The characters are a peril, also. Any creature known or
unknown is acceptable in a “new” story, but again, the slightest
whiff of “me too” is fatal. I wrote a long and, I thought,
original story in which the heroine had powers that I had never
heard of before, and a quest that seemed pretty original. I
worked hard and long to place it in a marvelous new landscape.
Then, seeking for a “perfect” description, I formed a mental
picture of her and started to write the descriptions.
I usually insert the descriptions piecemeal through the
opening action so as to save the reader a long several
paragraphs of “she wore” and “her long hair” and so on. In this
I trapped myself. Had I written out a detailed description all
in one piece I would have had no choice but to abandon it all
and just name her, since what I had done was to set down my
description of fair Titania.
My immediate reaction, when my cousin pointed it out to
me was to ignore it. “After all.” I said to myself, “how many
readers of small press fantasy ever read anything as heavy as
Spencer?”
I was rather full of myself back then.
Then reason returned. I returned the dreadful Titanesse
to her people and started anew. The lesson? It’s hard to get
the after-images of well-done fiction out of one’s head. If it
has a lot of descriptive passages, I have learned to take a
story apart to look at those descriptions separately. Far
better than readers writing to my favorite magazine to tell the
world that I had “stolen” fair Carvilia, and, worse, had her
behave as the haughty niece of Arthur never would have.
How does the reader-writer, for that is what most of us
are, avoid these traps of memory and tradition? There is a sure
way, although, like any good medicine, the taking is
distasteful. We often see features in a magazine entitled “Our
Readers Write.” Far better would it be that “Our Writers Read,”
e.g., that we read first to learn our craft and read again to
avoid poaching on those who have earned the right of place
before us. We owe that much, at least to those who have created
what we remember.