Generally Speaking
   
On using surnames in your writing
             
by Pat Laster 
       From the year I began teaching folk music in junior high and middle school General Music classes, I have been obsessed with surnames. J. N. Hook’s book, Family Names: The Origins, Meanings, Mutations, and History of more than 2800 American Names [Collier MacMillan Publishers, 1982] allowed me to discover with the students the meanings and origins of their names.
    
        At the time of Mr. Hook’s research, over 1,286, 556 different surnames of Americans existed. He categorized them in four ways:
     PLACES – Onnie Hill, William Lake.
     PATRONYMS BASED ON PERSONAL NAMES – Phebe George, Doresia Johnson.
     OCCUPATIONS – Vernon Farmer, Sarah Baker. 
     And DESCRIPTIVES – Obeta Rich, Mada Wise. [These examples came from my journaled lists.]
       Mr. Hook’s name is a place name. A hook is a “sharp bend in a stream or peninsula or some odd little corner of land.”
       Soon, I began notating –as I read– all the descriptive surnames I came across in newspapers, books and magazines. Nouns, adjectives, verbs, etc. Of course, the obituaries held acres of those diamond.
       The parameters I set for myself in the use of these words were:
    
  • They will not be used as surnames in the story, poem or essay.
  • Various forms of the words— -ses, -ings, -tions, are allowed.
  • The word can piggyback with another one.
  • For the first draft, the words selected from the list will be italicized. This way, the writer can see the extent of his/ her creativity in pulling together a disparate group of words into a cohesive unit.
  • There is no minimum number of these words that “must” be used. For the second chapter of a story I used only three.
      
        A list––and a poem built around it––follows.  [List has been alphabetized.]
        Agnes, Banks, Bernard, Bird, Blocker, Booth, Bowling, Brand, Brittle, Brooks, Brown, Bruno, Burns, Bush, Carpenter, Childs, Clay, Clement, Comb, Coopwood, Day, Duke, Files,
        French, Fry, Gates, Gist, Glaze, Gray, Green, Greensage, Hall, Halter, Hammer, Heard, Loon, March, Missouri, Moody, Painter, Piper, Potter, Prime, Prince, Reed, Rider, Rose, Roy,
        Sally, Salter, Sample, Session, Shore, Short, Small, Son, Stark, Stone,  Tracy, Treat, Victor, Wall, Waters, Weaver, West, White, Wills, Woods, Yielding, Young.     
    
    
    
    
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        And here’s the poem:
     
               Twilight
    
        Caramel haze glazes
        the waters of the lake,
        serene with keening loons
    
        and other nightbird calls.
        Further inland, whippoorwills.
        Spring peepers
      
        serenade the graying sky.
        Shore-bound, clay kiln-fired
        wind chimes
    
        play Olly-Olly-in-Free
        with hollow reeds and stones
        banked in shadowy willows.
    
        A carpenter, who’d combed
        the woods for a clearing
        small enough to build
     
        a secluded nest, lays down
        hammer and paint brush,
        and treats himself  
    
        to nature’s nightfall ambience,
        its bedding-down
        before the rose light fades.
    
        [© lovepat press 2010]
    
        Another day’s list of surnames: [alphabetized] Ashley, Archuleta, Bell, Black, Brown, Bullion, Bumpers, Cannon, Cash, Ceasar, Chase, Christ, Dare, Day, Dodge, Eno, Fielder, Forte, Fountain, Getter, Godfrey, Gray, Gross, Gudge, Hall, Happy, Hawks, Henry, House, James, Jolly, Joyne, Keith, Little, Marie, Martelle, May, Mayor, Millepied, Morissette, Noel, Page, Popper, Quash, Reed, Sharp, Small, Steed, Stell, Swan, Tester, Vest, Vines, West, Whisker, White, Wonder, Wood and Young.
    
     Still another day’s list of surnames: [unalphabetized] Bale, Green, Cook, Paisley, Swift, Urban, Crow, Savage, Stein, Todd, Huff, Thurman, Henry, Perry, Craft, Sabathia, Swisher, Hall Bell, Layne, Files, Halter, Wood, Rhoda, Stone, Keith, Ply, Whisker, Case, West, Mills, Hooks, Fudge, Moody, Chambers, Mace, Waddle, Bright, Farmer, Vales, Horn, Roy, Catching, Pettypool, Friday, Treat, Brooks, Argue, Cook, May, Stamps, Hunt, Bores, White, Dial, Amerine, Frank, Hill, Parsons, Sparks and Rice.
     
        Just think what a great story, poem or essay you could (ahem) “cook” up using one the lists above. I dare you to try your hand at it. I will if you will.
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